In class we peer reviewed each others' rough drafts. Aubrey
offered some very helpful advice to me. She said she already loved my paper. She also
said that the topic is super interesting and captures my attention. The only
issue is that my paper is not long enough. She offered a very helpful suggestion.
She said to write about what the rhetor didn’t do. I didn’t find much pathos in
my article and she said to address that. She advised that I write about what
the rhetor could’ve done to implement pathos. That’ll lengthen my paper and
also make it more interesting.
In the next week I will implement that advice into my
paper. I will review the article and see what the author could’ve done better
and how he could’ve used pathos.
The advice I received was awesome! It was very helpful
and very insightful. Because of it I can lengthen my paper and make it better.
I don’t have bad things to say about the feedback I received. Everyone was very
kind and respectful and very, very helpful. I would like for that to continue
in future reviews.
I very much enjoy the peer reviews we do in class. We not only get to hear what our peers think and receive their help, but he also get to know them a little better. It's pretty fun to do and my peers are super insightful and helpful. I like the exercise quite a bit.
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